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I unbutton you, kiss by kiss.
I untie you, touch by touch.
I unzip you, rib by rib.

I unfasten you, moment by moment.
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Given 2012-07-24
* by *L0NE-W0lf ( Suggested by Mrs-Freestar-Bul and Featured by thorns )
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PinkaholiQue Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Professional General Artist
I got chills... Beautiful!
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Oh wow. Thanks!
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CelticPuppy Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
It would take me 2/3 pages to describe all this, BEAUTIFUL
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Hehe thank you. :giggle:

:heart: :hug:
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:+fav:

hi! i hope you don't mind my humble feature:
your lovely piece is handpicked. (link)

thank you.
:iconbluedancingflower:
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
No, of course not. I very much appreciate it actually!

Thank you so much! :glomp:

:iconclearflowerplz:
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you too. this is for you: :iconflowersplz:
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
Aw, thank you. :iconflowerrainplz:
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skyeyedangel Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Your poems are very nice i posted this one on my face book.
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Am I credited there?
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skyeyedangel Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
im sorry if i cannot place the poem there i will take it off i can credit you there i think you are
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
I'd prefer if you could take it off.
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skyeyedangel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
ok i will sorry if i have bothered you do great things with your writings im being honest with what i have done ill take it off have a great day
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
I do appreciate the honesty. :hug:
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skyeyedangel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
yep i took it off when i saw you wanted me too i love your writings keep it up. I respect you and appreciate your hard work have a nice day
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Thank you so much. I hope you have a great week!
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sara-satellite Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the formatting you did. It really emphasizes the poem. For example, the bolded "moment by moment" or the italicized. I don't read a lot of literature on dA, but this has a lot of power behind it.
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Thank you so much. :thanks:
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sara-satellite Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome!
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GaiaTheHedgehog15 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I find this sweet and beautiful . . .
I reckon this is how many (if not ALL XD) girls would want their first time to start.
:iconsweetplz: It's beautifully adorable!! ^w^
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
Thank you.
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PigeonChic Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
This is adorable!
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
Thanks. :aww:
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PigeonChic Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
No problem
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:iconeruis:
Eruis Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Short, but contains a lot of emotions.
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Thank you.
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012   Writer
Beautiful! I love, love, love the flow and format of this.

Congrats on the DD! :heart:
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Thank you so much! :hug:
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jigz66 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012   Writer
its beautiful
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Thank you.
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chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
whoah~
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
:rose:
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angemuet Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
magical sensual ... i love it.
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Thank you. :heart:

And I'm very glad you like it. :aww:
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angemuet Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
you're very welcome and i meant to say as well that the DD is well-deserved!!
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Thank you so much. :hug:
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Sachi-pon Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pretty!! (and normally, i'm not interested in poetry.)
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Thanks. Glad I could whisk you into a bit of literature, even if it's for a mere moment.
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KMusicDreamer Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*Gasp*. INCREDIBLE.
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Terra2341 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student
Oh nvm I saw your ID. Nice pic, though!
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KMusicDreamer Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha. That's awesome. :) Thanks! :)
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Terra2341 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student
Yah :iconshaplz: & no prob :D
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KMusicDreamer Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehe. :)
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Terra2341 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student
Is your name Amber?? You look a lot like my cousin!
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shallowknight Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
more
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Argentum-Lupae-Luna Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was amazing. Powerful, simple, emotive, and most of all, beautiful. This most definitely deserved to be a DD, love.
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Thank you so much! :hug:
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Argentum-Lupae-Luna Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, love. Keep writing, you have a rare talent.
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LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Professional Writer
Glorious. Congrats on the DD.
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Thank you.
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