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I unbutton you, kiss by kiss.
I untie you, touch by touch.
I unzip you, rib by rib.

I unfasten you, moment by moment.
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Given 2012-07-24
* by *L0NE-W0lf ( Suggested by *Mrs-Freestar-Bul and Featured by `thorns )
:iconskyeyedangel:
Your poems are very nice i posted this one on my face book.
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
Am I credited there?
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:iconskyeyedangel:
im sorry if i cannot place the poem there i will take it off i can credit you there i think you are
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
I'd prefer if you could take it off.
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:iconskyeyedangel:
ok i will sorry if i have bothered you do great things with your writings im being honest with what i have done ill take it off have a great day
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
I do appreciate the honesty. :hug:
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:iconskyeyedangel:
yep i took it off when i saw you wanted me too i love your writings keep it up. I respect you and appreciate your hard work have a nice day
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
Thank you so much. I hope you have a great week!
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*sara-satellite Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the formatting you did. It really emphasizes the poem. For example, the bolded "moment by moment" or the italicized. I don't read a lot of literature on dA, but this has a lot of power behind it.
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:iconl0ne-w0lf:
Thank you so much. :thanks:
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