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I read your bones after the firestorm.

The silence suits us, the smell consumes us.
Our bodies have been savaged by the flames: eaten.

Blackened by the fierce fire. Ambers still left,
Dancing in our eaten flesh - flickering like incandescents.

We've been entirely devoured, and yet - no regrets.
By our own devices, a fire we both started.

Flames of passion.


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bachus99 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
So concise and sparse - so well captured and a very enjoyable read!
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
I'm so glad you like it! And that's wonderful to hear. :love:
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SplittyDev Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Wow.. This is just amazing..
Reading your texts is like viewing a good movie <3
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Oh thanks so much. :rose:
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ForestoFairies Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the dance of a dark fire...
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
:heart:
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mistertrece Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy shit i love it!
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Fantastic reaction. :giggle:
But what about it exactly?
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mistertrece Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That line: Dancing in our eaten flesh - flickering like incandescents.

I see images in my head, and that´s magic. Thank you for that, you paint images with your words.
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L0NE-W0lf Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Oh excellent, I'm so glad to hear that! No, thank you for the kind words. :heart:
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